I feel that the sweep lead on beat 7 throughout the first half of the song should change with the music's key signature, if you know what I mean. There's also something a little off about the 16th bass notes. It's as if I'm getting a headache listening to them. The piano's a little weird with the sound, too. Sounds just go in and out with this song, maybe a little more flow would be nice. Not the worst I've listened to, though. It's got a catchy melody, and it's something new, so I'll give you that. Hope you get better as a music creator!